writing goals
1. explain opinions
2. use a introduction technique
3.use a variety of sentence starters
Tuesday, January 18, 2011
reflections on the pearl
I thought this book was kinda boring but it had some moments. Like when the baby got biten.All of the parts that didn't have any action were kinda boring to me. In the end I think this book is pretty good with the plot line.
While you had some strong opinions, you didn't support those opinions with examples from the story. When writing a reflections, you need to justify why you feel the way you do using examples from the book.
While you had some strong opinions, you didn't support those opinions with examples from the story. When writing a reflections, you need to justify why you feel the way you do using examples from the book.
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