Andrew- Tall, Strict, tired, nervous, Friend
Collin- short, strong, awesome, athletic, friend
Zach- strong, handsome, athletic, beautiful, Bf
Austin- Great, sociable, cool, redhead, best
Kasia- short, nice, friend, crazy, great
writing goals 1. explain opinions 2. use a introduction technique 3.use a variety of sentence starters
Tuesday, December 14, 2010
Thursday, December 9, 2010
Baseball and football players hair
There is a lot of hair in the NFL. The best people with hair are Tom Brady QB for the patriots. His hair is cool because it is like justin beibers hair but a little longer. Troy Polamalu. Troy is a safety for the Pittsburgh Steelers. He is really good with hair and football. Also in baseball Tim Lincecum has long straight hair. Tim Lincecum plays for the San Francisco Giants. My favorite athlete is Troy Polamalu because his hair because it know wear it wants to go.
Wednesday, December 8, 2010
Literary analysis of “All Summer in a Day”
How can there be no summer on Venus for than 7 years? Written by Ray Bradbury is a book that takes place on Venus. It is about a girl named Margot missing summer. In the short story, “All Summer in a Day”, the plotline, character, and lesson found in the story all follow up to a irony mode of literature.
I think it is irony because first it starts out with the world in chaos. The world in chaos is Margot missing summer for 7 years and she became depressed about it. The major conflict is everybody not believing Margot when she told everyone about summer 7 years ago. Then the classmates locked her in the closet. The loss of sanity was for Margot. She is really depressed on how there was no summer in 7 years. In edition it is irony because of the characteristics.
It can be irony because it is highly unrealistic. Since it takes place on Venous and it hasn’t stopped raining for 7 years it is unrealistic, meaning it cannot happen. Also the main character is stupid, weak, and not in control. She gets locked in a closet proving that she is weak and she is not in control because she did not choose to be in the closet. Another thing is the forces of good are weak which is Margot for getting locked in the closet and the forces of evil is strong like when will locked Margot in the closet. There is also the purpose to think it is irony.
The purpose of irony is to examine our fears. It is show us hey it’s not that bad because we are on earth not Venus. One of the symbolism is the sky to be gray. It was because it was always raining. Also it rained which is another one. All of these reasons prove that the mode is irony.
This is why I thought it was irony with the characteristics to the symbolism. The plot fits into it perfect to be irony. That is why I think it is irony. Summer is important to everyone including the people on Venus that is why I think this in irony.
I think it is irony because first it starts out with the world in chaos. The world in chaos is Margot missing summer for 7 years and she became depressed about it. The major conflict is everybody not believing Margot when she told everyone about summer 7 years ago. Then the classmates locked her in the closet. The loss of sanity was for Margot. She is really depressed on how there was no summer in 7 years. In edition it is irony because of the characteristics.
It can be irony because it is highly unrealistic. Since it takes place on Venous and it hasn’t stopped raining for 7 years it is unrealistic, meaning it cannot happen. Also the main character is stupid, weak, and not in control. She gets locked in a closet proving that she is weak and she is not in control because she did not choose to be in the closet. Another thing is the forces of good are weak which is Margot for getting locked in the closet and the forces of evil is strong like when will locked Margot in the closet. There is also the purpose to think it is irony.
The purpose of irony is to examine our fears. It is show us hey it’s not that bad because we are on earth not Venus. One of the symbolism is the sky to be gray. It was because it was always raining. Also it rained which is another one. All of these reasons prove that the mode is irony.
This is why I thought it was irony with the characteristics to the symbolism. The plot fits into it perfect to be irony. That is why I think it is irony. Summer is important to everyone including the people on Venus that is why I think this in irony.
Wednesday, December 1, 2010
Tim Lincecum
Tim Lincecum Is one of my favorite players In the MLB. Even though he is on the giants. Part of the reason I like him so much is because there is a kid in our school that looks just like him. His career ERA is 3.04. Also He stroke out 907 people in his career. His record for this year is 16-10. He won 2 cy young awards in a row in 08,and 09.
Tuesday, November 30, 2010
Water
Water Is my favorite drink. When I grow up I want to be a Water boy because Andrew said I would be good at it. Water is the healthiest drink you can have. Every living thing on earth needs water to survive. It Is so useful in everything. It can even save lives from all sort of things like to stop a fire or to keep you hydrated. That is why I like water.
Thursday, November 4, 2010
Creative story
It was a windy day when the man crossed the road and went into the bus station. George, the man was waiting for the bus to come and take him home. He waited all day but there was no bus. George was a impatient guy he hated waiting. He always waited for the bus. This time there was no bus and that made him angry. He walked 6 miles to his work wondering why the bus didn't come. As he was walking on the side of the street downtown he noticed the street was empty absolutely no cars. No one was in sight this was very strange.
George was freaking out he didn't know what was going on. His office building was closed something was really wrong. He sprinted and started yelling "HELLO, ANYBODY , ANYONE!" George was scared running back home slammed open his door. Going up the stairs into the bedroom. He pulled up the covers and his wife is missing too.
"Ahhhhhh," what a horrible dream. George woke up in shock sweating and gasping! He jumped out of bed and ran outside he saw cars on the street he was so happy. That day George changed he never was mad at the late bus again.
George was freaking out he didn't know what was going on. His office building was closed something was really wrong. He sprinted and started yelling "HELLO, ANYBODY , ANYONE!" George was scared running back home slammed open his door. Going up the stairs into the bedroom. He pulled up the covers and his wife is missing too.
"Ahhhhhh," what a horrible dream. George woke up in shock sweating and gasping! He jumped out of bed and ran outside he saw cars on the street he was so happy. That day George changed he never was mad at the late bus again.
Tuesday, November 2, 2010
the gospel acording to Larry
This is about a 17 year old kid in Boston named Josh Swenson. He creates this website to show people how wrong consumerism is in our society. Witch is Larry.com(he poses as Larry to keep his identity secret. The Larry website gets more and more hits a day. Even his school is opening a club about Larry. Later up in Maine there is a Larry fest after words people find out its Josh Swenson. He pretends to commit suicide to stop everyone bothering him. Later He decides to run for president so he can really change the world.
Wednesday, October 27, 2010
Friday, October 22, 2010
Magic
When I think of magic I think of how much the brewers need it to be a real baseball team. The Philadelphia Phillies is where the magic is they have the best and magical pitching staff in the NL. Roy Halladay, Roy Oswalt, Cole Hamels. The brewers does not have any magic at all. If they did the would not have a 77-85 record. It is really sad that so many people like them and they have some good players and their team still is really bad.
Thursday, October 21, 2010
Exploding pants superhero
A strong superhero in Zachiestan far far away had the amazing power to make his pants explode. The evil Andrew was hypnotizing people making them think the brewers were good went there not! Only 1 man can stop them and he is Zachdude. With the power of exploding pants Zachdude destroyed Andrew and saved Zachiestan. Andrew the evil villain went to the Zachiestan county jail. Reporters ask him what does he think about saving them from liking the brewers" I just want to help the citizens of Zachiestan one pair of pants at a time".
That is a true story he did save them and he is the strongest, coolest, handsomest person of all time.
That is a true story he did save them and he is the strongest, coolest, handsomest person of all time.
Patriot essay
People that love our country and give thanks to the men and women fighting for us is patriotism. Many people in our country have patriotism if they are willing to die for our country. Patriotism is very important to our country. Without it we wouldn’t have the army we have today. The United States would not exist without patriotism.
With the people in Iraq and Afghanistan to the people that respect them. A lot of Americans a patriotic in their own way. My dad puts up a couple 1,000 flags up in his cemetery and has boy scouts hand out to the people or veterans there. More than 1,000 people go their every year on July 4. There is a lot of people at war right now.
While placing flags at the cemetery shows patriotism, fighting for our country and freedom is also another way to show your patriotism. There are a lot of people that came from another country and have patriotism for this country and the other. Some Americans out there hate our country and don’t care about it. People like them don’t even care about the war. If there was no patriotism in the US we would not off broke free of England.
Fighting for our country shows patriotism and back before the U.S. was a country many of those people showed their patriotism, too. The settlers did not like England and used patriotism to the new world in order to become free. They went to start a new country called the United States. Many people showed patriotism to break away from England and go to a free country. A lot of people wanted to show their patriotism for their new country. Patriotism has been a huge role in our countries history. That’s why without patriotism this country would not exist.
Even know patriotism is important and helps our country a lot of people don’t have patriotism and they do not want to support their country. We need more patriotism for our country to make it stronger.
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